Tantalizing Blooms website

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You should consider resizeing your images so that they don't take to long to load. Its good to continue to take the high rez pictures and just make copies of them and resize them. Also make sure you add sometype of a water mark on them to protect them.

I think one of the things I wished I did from the beginning was to keep original pictures in one folder and then make copies and resize the copies into the different sizes needed for the website.
 
I have been doing our website for the store, and was looking for some feedback from you guys. I do not have a shopping cart as of yet, have not gotten that far, but I do have a link to our teleflora website which does accept orders. Please let me know what you think positive and negative. Thanks.

http://www.tantalizingblooms.com

Let me begin by saying I'm glad to see your building your own site...

Perhaps this thread will help you add a title and description to your meta tags...
http://www.flowerchat.com/forums/showthread.php?t=2662&highlight=summertime

I would suggest that you try to use keywords in the url...
Example:
your url for your Teleflora page...
http://www.tantalizingblooms.com/id21.html

try something like...
http://www.tantalizingblooms.com/telefloraflorist.html

Also, I agree with Eric about the smaller pictures...
I would take your pictures one step further...Why not link the pictures to your Teleflora shopping cart (it's already paid for). If you link each picture to the Teleflora shopping cart, you are not as likely to loss the consumer.

Example same teleflora web page:
Your first picture is TF 23-2...
to link it to the teleflora shopping cart simply code it as following:
<a href="http://www.tantalizingblooms.com/id21.html"><img src="images/lily topiary.gif" width="120" height="120" border="0" title="Lily Topiary" alt="picture Lily Topiary, Lilies, roses and solidaster in a garden green base with a festive ribbon.">Lily Topiary</a><br>

(notice I changed your picture size to width="120" height="120" border="0")

Mary Lou

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(notice I changed your picture size to width="120" height="120" border="0")

Sound advice....the only thing I would change is only use the width="120" and skip the height as it distorts images when they are not exactly square and the topiary image is a lot taller than it is wide.
 
I would bring this statement to the top of the page...Search engines (spiders, robots) read your page from left to right, top to bottom. They place most importance to the top left side. Some search engines now using themes or neighborhoods for the first classification of your website as a whole. The search engines will have problems trying to decide on your theme. Remember, your focus is local florist, flower shop, floral customer service

Here's how to enrich your web page with better keywords...

Tantalizing Blooms in a full serivce florist specializing in weddings (flowers) and funerals (arrangements). We pride ourselves on our excellent (floral) customer service and high-quality floral arrangements.
We are not your typical florist. We think "out of the box" Our (flower) arrangements are unique and one of a kind. If you want tradtional (flower arrangements), (our flower shop can help you) also.
We, at Tantalizing Blooms absolutely love our (floral) jobs!! It becomes very evident when you use our flower shop. Both,(name names) take flower arrangements very seriously and want our customers to realize flowers are a natural and healthful moderator of moods. Tantalizing Blooms strives to give you the best (floral) customer service possible.




Customers are saying some wonderful things.....

I just wanted to tell you that my husband ordered me red roses from your
(flower) shop for our anniversary today. I have never seen (a rose) arrangement like this
before. It was extraordinary!!! Everyone in my office had all stopped
to admire (the rose arrangement) and asked (which flower shop it) came from. Thank you so much for making
this day extra special!!!

Thanks!!!
Monica

Some of your descriptions are in all caps...most consumers don't like this (on the internet, they assume you are yelling)
 
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Customers are saying some wonderful things.....

I just wanted to tell you that my husband ordered me red roses from your
(flower) shop for our anniversary today. I have never seen (a rose) arrangement like this
before. It was extraordinary!!! Everyone in my office had all stopped
to admire (the rose arrangement) and asked (which flower shop it) came from. Thank you so much for making
this day extra special!!!

Thanks!!!
Monica

Can I go ahead and change a quote from a customer like this?
 
Customers are saying some wonderful things.....

I just wanted to tell you that my husband ordered me red roses from your
(flower) shop for our anniversary today. I have never seen (a rose) arrangement like this
before. It was extraordinary!!! Everyone in my office had all stopped
to admire (the rose arrangement) and asked (which flower shop it) came from. Thank you so much for making
this day extra special!!!

Thanks!!!
Monica

Can I go ahead and change a quote from a customer like this?



You aren't really changing it, just clarifying it with a few keywords...

Besides, most of the Customer Comments or Customer Testimonials on the internet are bogus and written purely for marketing benefit...

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Really? None of ours are "made up". We get customer comments all the time. I would think other florists would get the same and not need to add anything untrue to their websites. Don't get me wrong, I am sure it happens all the time, but I don't think it is right. I would not want to embellish any of them. I wouldn't want a customer to see that something they sent us wasn't actually what they wrote. It makes us look like liars. I have actually had customers come in and order roses because of seeing that quote. One last week actually worked with the woman who sent us that thank you.
As far as changing the wording on the rest of the page, I have done that and want to say thank you. I appreciate your help with this. I am going to use your suggestions from now on while building the site.

Kim
Tantalizing Blooms
http://www.tantalizingblooms.com
 
Kim, Nice start. I would have to agree with some of the comments here.

1. Pictures load way too slow. Most people have moved on by the time they load.
2. Too many words on the home page. Pictures sell. The words are important but move them down a bit.
3. The bath and body pics are not quite as nice as your other pics. With these products, you're trying to sell that warm, fuzzy, sitting by the fireplace in your bathrobe feeling.

Again, you're off to a good start. Keep it up
 
If you're going to keep your Teleflora site, IMO you'll get far more benefit from your unique images by uploading them there and allowing customers to purchase online. The bamboo template skin there is very attractive, btw.

TF has a self-administration tool that allows you to upload your own pictures, write descriptions and select the prices. You can also create custom categories.

If the idea is to replace the TF site, then you'll need a shopping cart as part of your hosting package.

The images currently take a looooong time to load. This can be solved by resizing them and saving them for the web. We use PhotoShop Elements as our image editor but there's other software to handle the task.

Congratulations on taking the step to develop an independent site. :)
 
Just want to send a big thank you out to everyone who is trying to help us out with our site. I am working on what I can understand LOL. I do not know anything about building a webpage, I am learning as I go along. I have no clue what a meta tag is or how to write the codes, but hopefully, I will learn all of this. I just really wanted to let you all know how much I appreciate you giving me your feedback. :)
 
Just want to send a big thank you out to everyone who is trying to help us out with our site. I am working on what I can understand LOL. I do not know anything about building a webpage, I am learning as I go along. I have no clue what a meta tag is or how to write the codes, but hopefully, I will learn all of this. I just really wanted to let you all know how much I appreciate you giving me your feedback. :)

HTML (coding) is the hidden coding behind most webpages, that tells all browsers what to display on the consumer's computer screen.

HTML tags are contained within "<" and ">" brackets. Most html tags have an opening tag <tag> and a closing tag </tag> which contains a "/" before the tag name.

HTML coding divides most webpages into two parts - head information and document body


Here's a sample HTML page with the basic structure.

<html>
<head>
<title>We are a local florist</title>
<meta name="description" content="10-15 word description of your site read by some search engines">
<meta name="keywords" content="main keywords of your site separated by commas. Read by some search engines">
</head>
<body>
<p align="left">This is my new local florist web page. We hope you like it. Please buy flowers!!! Come back and visit again. </p>
</body>
</html>



So let's look at the head information
Per example...
<head>
<title>We are a local florist</title>
<meta name="description" content="10-15 word description of your site read by some search engines">
<meta name="keywords" content="main keywords of your site separated by commas. Read by some search engines">
</head>


So let's make your title read something like this...
<title>Macomb florist and flowers - buy flowers online at #1 Macomb florist -flower shop in Macomb IL offers same day delivery</title>

let's make your description read something like this...
<meta name="description" content="Fresh, beautiful flowers delivered by Macomb florist. Our flower shop delivers to Macomb IL, Colchester IL, Blandinsville IL, and Plymouth IL.">

let's make your keyword read something like this...
<meta name="keywords" content="Macomb florist, flowers online, flower delivery to Colchester IL, Blandinsville IL, and Plymouth IL">


Here is an old post that might help understand about of these head information tags
http://www.flowerchat.com/forums/showthread.php?t=2662&highlight=summertime
title tag
Remember, you only have one chance to make a first impression, make a good one and your visitors will be back.


Title Tag - The title tag gives the surfers and the search engines an idea of what your web page is about. Think of it as a title of a book or the name of a chapter within a book. Each page of your website should be titled that reflects the content (HINT: keywords) on that page.
You shouldn't name your title "Plants" if the page has nothing but "birthday flowers" on it.

Always use your keywords in the title tag at least once.

Try to place your keywords at the start of the title tag.

Avoid listing the same word multiple times in a row since most search engines penalize for this.

Use the longer form and the plural form of a keyword when possible. For example, if you use planting in your Title tag, a search on planting or plant will yield a match on most search engines. (this is called "substring")

Use Upper & Lower case lettering for keywords in general. Example: Anniversary Flowers are sold here!

Longer title tags are more effective because more words allow you to build a compelling reason to visit your web site . However, shorter ones can be used if you need to better emphasize a keyword that is not ranking. (HINT: 6 to 12 words)

Make your title interesting and compelling to the reader to convince them why they should click there.

(BIG HINT: Surfers don't read text, they recognize words)



Description tag
Meta Tag Description - The Description tag provides a concise summary of your web page content. Most search engines display the description tag under the title tag as the site information in the SERP (search engine results page). This brief description of your site's content gives the surfer important information they need to determine whether they want to visit your site or not...If there's no meta description to display, most search engines pull the first few lines of text from your site's content and display it on the SERP. You've probably seen a SERP with results that look like this: ""XXX florist" -- [home] [about us] [delivery info] [contact us] [links]

Google ignores the meta description tag and will automatically generate its own description for your page from the body content. (HINT: Google will display the first sentence or headlines that contains the theme of the page) The only exceptions are the Flash, Frame or All Image sites that have no content, where the search term are not found in the text, then Google will display your Description Tag.

Jon Glick (of Yahoo! Search) stated that Yahoo! Search processes the description tag similar to page copy.


Always use your keywords in the description tag at least once.
Try to place your keywords at the start of the description tag since most search engines cut off the display after about 200 characters.
Descriptions tags should be 12-15 words as most search engines ignore anything past the 15th word.
The description tag must be thought of as a marketing tool, include targeted keywords and action verbs like "online florist", "buy" and "sell".
Avoid sentences such as: The best site on the web
Don't use an exact copy of the title tag
Don't use a list of keywords, the description tag should make sense and be in sentence format.

Flower shop produced flowers with flower arrangements from local flowers. (HINT: sounds sammy, this will get you penalized)


Keyword tag
Choose the right keywords, and you'll see your traffic skyrocket.

Well, I started this thread with the use of keywords

I'll add a couple of additional thoughts:

Put yourself in the shoes of the visitor you want to attract. Make a list of what kind of keywords or phrases they are likely to search. (HINT: think like the consumer, ask the consumer which words they would use...they are not florist and don't know your buzz words)

I promise, you would be shocked at what some consumers will use to search for flowers or florist...
(HINT: you rarely want to target a single keyword, use phrases...surfers learn quickly that if they type in "florist" or "flower shop" that they get listings for florist from all over the world!)

Once you use some phrases your consumers are searching to find your local site, you'll have tapped into a continuous stream of free advertising for your web site which beats paying out thousands of dollars for advertising.

Here are a couple of other web tools to analyze your keywords:


http://www.webjectives.com/keyword.htm

http://www.searchengineworld.com/cgi-bin/kwda.cgi (I prefer this one)

http://www.jimworld.com/tools/keyword-analyzer/ (this one is more advanced)

http://www.keyworddensity.com/ (compare your page to another page)



I hope this helps you understand the head information and it will help your website rank well.

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ok, let make it simple...
This is how the head reads now...notice your title in red...cut and paste new title , description and keyword tag in blue and replace the red.

<html>
<HEAD>
<meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=iso-8859-1">

<META http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=iso-8859-1">
<META http-equiv="Expires" content="0">
<META name="TRELLIX_BUILDER_VER" content="1.0"><META name="TRELLIX_OPEN_SITE_COMMAND" content="http://build.tripod.lycos.com:80/trellix/sitebuilder/SiteBuilderServlet?fUrl=/trellix/sitebuilder/f_error.html&sUrl=/trellix/sitebuilder/f_edit_page.html&Command=OpenSite&FileName=076951682458563756/site.xml"></META><META
name="categories" content="">
<!--base href="http://tantalizingblooms.tripod.com//"-->
<!--/base--><script language="Javascript"><!--
document.isTrellix = 1;
// --></script><title>Tantalizing Blooms</title>
</HEAD>


<title>Macomb florist and flowers - buy flowers online at #1 Macomb florist -flower shop in Macomb IL offers same day delivery</title>
<meta name="description" content="Fresh, beautiful flowers delivered by Macomb florist. Our flower shop delivers to Macomb IL, Colchester IL, Blandinsville IL, and Plymouth IL.">
<meta name="keywords" content="Macomb florist, flowers online, flower delivery to Colchester IL, Blandinsville IL, and Plymouth IL">


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